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Well I'm keeping this kind of brief considering it is an ask your oc picture, but to begin I'd like to state that the star rating is wh...

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Idea please critique
 Searing flames engulfed the house surrounding a youthful dark haired orchish child. Laying on the ground he called out “Father! Mother!” yet no response; only the sounds of metal clanking metal and screams of death could be heard. Left with nothing more but the dicouraging, depressing, thought of his parents each gasping for their final breathes he whispered “I love you Mama, I love you Daddy, please don’t die I need you, both of you, and I don’t want to be alone.” One after the other the sounds of his friends and family being ruthlessly slaughtered echoed through the house, and seeing no other options he curled into the fetal position as tears of loss fell from his hopeless eyes.
 Within minutes the crashing sound of a spartan kicked door filled the house. Soldiers scattered about in search of prisoners to take, and valuables to loot for themselves. Upon locating the young orc the captain came and knelt beside him. “Take him to my b
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Makarov's restraint pt 6
CHAPTER 6
    Back aboard the cruiser Rey consistently repeated "deep in the heart, down in the void, this place is like home, but it's vacant of noise. deep in the heart, down in the void, this place is like home, but it's vacant of noise....."
  
 Finally Melia deciphered Adurenai's riddle. "REY! I FIGURED IT OUT!"
"WELL WHAT IS IT?!"
"Ok so deep in the heart, we're by a jungoe planet so the heart of the jungle! Down in the void, caves are dark, void, abyss like! Caves are also homes to different creatures so this place is like home! Go deep enough into a cave and it becomes silent thus vacant of noise!"
"YASSS! SO THEIR IN A CAVE IN THE HEART OF THE JUNGLE!" She stated continuing with "LETS GO!!!!" Which she screamed loud enough to hear her voice echo throughout the ship.
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Makarov's restraint pt 5
CHAPTER 5
Getting down on her knees Adurenai threw her arms around Makarov's neck and her head on his shoulder; with flaming tears running down her cheeks. "Mak..." she mumbled "you know I need you. You're the only highlight in my life... the only person that ever wanted to be friends with a beast like me.... I love you; I always loved you.... you just never noticed.... and now it never mattered."
  "Adurenai listen, I know you've had a rough life. So have I. But even after all the things that pulled me down, held me back, and just went downright terrible I still managed to find my happy ending. And you will too. I promise. We both I could get up and leave right now, but I'm choosing not to because right now you need a friend, and after all the times you helped me I'm going to help you. So really Adu just sit down and talk okay?"
   "Okay...well" Adurenai continued sharing her many problems with Makarov for several hours as Rey continued the search to find them.
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The essay should describe how thoughtful and effective participation in civic life is the responsibility of every citizen and how it teaches compassion and understanding.
IK, VAGUE RIGHT?!! THIS IS GOOD, YOU CAN BRANCH OUT TO ALL DIFFERENT SUBJECTS!!! Let's get on to the paragraphs.
HELLA GREAT INTRO. Captivate them with good vocabulary, amazing grammer, and interesting topics. No questions you dipstick. MAKE IT AT A GOOD PARAGRAPH!!! You need four pages of this thing dumbbutt. Make it dramatic, and have it mention all topics of the essay.
How does community service teach others compassion? MAKE IT SUPER CHEESY!!! Lots of big words. THESAURUS.COM IS YOUR BEST FRIEND! At least three paragraphs. Needs to be four pages, gosh darn it.
How does community service bring a community together? List some examples . ONCE AGAIN, BE MORE CHEESY THAN FLAVOR BLASTED GOLDFISH. BIG WORDS ARE NICY. REALLY THICC. ALSO BE KRONK. TRY AND WORD THING IN SEVERAL DIFFERENT WAYS THROUG
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Please take a moment to watch like amd share these vids on your status's for me peeps :)
At least share them I am planning to start posting more vids and am trying to get noticed as I get started amd getting a better cam. Thanks yall and good day my friends :D

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Steven Universe by AgentMakarov  this is my attempt to drawing steven, and if your willing please support me on youtube as well with likes subscriptions or whatever :) (Smile) I am working to get a better camera than holding my phone for its camera
Here's a link to part one of two (both are uploaded) of me drawing steven. I did my best to hold the camera and draw him XD So forgive any mistakes please thank you
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NOW LETS SEE YOUR UNIVERSE ARTS AS WELL! :D (Big Grin)
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Check out and support me on youtube please. I am just getting started on there and working towards a better camera. The band playing in the bg is a friend of mine and a link to their fb page is in the description. Thank yall and enjoy :)

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 Searing flames engulfed the house surrounding a youthful dark haired orchish child. Laying on the ground he called out “Father! Mother!” yet no response; only the sounds of metal clanking metal and screams of death could be heard. Left with nothing more but the dicouraging, depressing, thought of his parents each gasping for their final breathes he whispered “I love you Mama, I love you Daddy, please don’t die I need you, both of you, and I don’t want to be alone.” One after the other the sounds of his friends and family being ruthlessly slaughtered echoed through the house, and seeing no other options he curled into the fetal position as tears of loss fell from his hopeless eyes.
 Within minutes the crashing sound of a spartan kicked door filled the house. Soldiers scattered about in search of prisoners to take, and valuables to loot for themselves. Upon locating the young orc the captain came and knelt beside him. “Take him to my barracks!” he commanded pointing at two tall shadowy figures in red cloals and black armor. The only noteable thing about the design was a large solid red claw painted into the top left corner of each soldiers breastplate.
Idea please critique
Idea I'm thinking of writing up tell me what you think so far
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Just so you may always hear it when you wish. I love you more than anything :iconalphalordcalypso:
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delaverano Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2017  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks for a FAV!
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AgentMakarov Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You are welcome! :D
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Thanks for the fave
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AgentMakarov Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yw
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CamelliaCorn Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
wwoah thanks for the watch though!
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AgentMakarov Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome!
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Thank you for adding me to your watch list. It is much appreciated :)
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